Year 4 story writing

 As our English focus of 'Stories in imaginary settings' concludes, I would love to share some of the creative and imaginative descriptions Year 4 have included in their stories! 

Can you spot any powerful vocabulary, similes, alliteration or descriptions using the 5 senses? 

Here are some excerpts from the stories...

The Colourful Candy Cane Forest by Amy: They walked continuously through the forest and saw lots of portals.... red, green, purple and crystalline blue.

The Radio by Estera:  He had a black, misty mask on and a hat of wolf's fur as black as midnight.

Nyara: She went to a skate park and did some really exhilarating tricks....After Clawdeen got home she burst with curiosity.

The Queen's Coronation by Catherine: Aiden, Anne and Andrew were incensed.

The Abandoned House in the forest by Jessica: One day she went on her bike as the sky was shimmering and the clouds were as white as a pillow.

Angelin: Then Angelin and Lavender saw a shadowy figure. They felt inquisitive and curious so they decided to go further...

Well done Year 4 - I think we have some budding authors in our midst!